My book start’s with a boy called jinx and his family has been killed by fairy tale monsters . He has a horrible step mom and dad they always make him do the house work. So now they have a baby and the step dad whent to leave him in the woods but then they come across a wizard and he buys jinx and that’s where I am at.
March 2, 2017 at 8:30 am
Hello Leo,
Are you reading this book again, or are you still reading it since we gave it to you last year? Sometimes it’s interesting to explore why people read the same book for a long time.
Your description is clear, but there is little of your opinion here.
Revise how to use apostrophes.