It is 1989 a war has just begun, I am 12 and my name is naruto. The russian army has just broken my door down and my mum is dead. While I am writing this my dad is fighting the russian’s and it just sounded like he has just been shot so I ran into a cupboard. The leader comes up the stairs I don’t breathe and then he comes over to the cupboard. I dare move he lent down and then I hear a gun shots.Then a soldier run up the stairs and he said help me sir English troops shot all of our soldiers. They don’t have are current location but they are searching all the house it won’t be long we need to go…
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June 6, 2016 at 4:46 pm
This is an excellent start as you have placed us immediately in the middle of the action.
Where is the rest? Write a plan to help develop ideas. Where will your conflict come from? How will your main character resolve this?